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Dark Lady of the Night

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She dances 'twixt and 'tween my veins,
My Dark Lady of the quiet wee hours,
Her soft breath wreaths me with flowers,
And her scent is that of the angels.

My angel of the lonely night times,
She who always hides herself from view,
I can feel her presence surrounding me,
Warm and loving, patient and true.

Her fingers tickle and trickle over my skin,
Tingles and fire left in their slow wake.
Her lips meet mine in a crescendo of sensation,
And still I beg for more, still more, ever more.

Passion aroused by the way she walks,
Through the slumbering corners of my mind.
Gentle carress across the walls she finds there,
Watching them crumble to dust before her.

My dear Dark Lady of the quiet wee hours,
Departing too soon as dreams come to claim me.
Her warmth and life drifts and flows away,
And once more I'm alone... 'til next the stars spiral.
First draft of something that started to form in my mind last night before I went to sleep, it needs a little work again but then t'is rare that you get anything completely right the first time round isn't it?

Most trouble I had with this? The title. Anyone think I did well with it? If not, can anyone suggest anything?

As always comments/criticisms are more than welcome :D
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jeweljk's avatar
you're right it is very romantic and passionate and sweet, though it seems to be more of a metaphorical representation of love than describing an actual person or situation... i dont know :)